Research Essay Rough Draft - Please Proof read.

[Anneythompson]

I have a hard time with Research essays. Any advice would be helpful. I know I need to redo all my sited sources, my teacher already gave me a bunch of information on how to do so. Other than that, what can I do to make this better or a good research essay overall?
Thank you
Annie Thompson

[bszumsky]

Looks like you have quite a bit of research. However you will need to correct the in-text citation and the Works Cited since those have basic errors in formatting. Review the MLA documentation postings on the Help home page.

B. Szumsky